Final Design

I don't like your design

A young person having to exit so soon

Is not OK with me

It might be OK for an old man experiencing a stroke 

But even that’s too excessive

 

A person in their 40s 

With so much life

Kindness

Love

And passion for life

The life you've created

Is not OK with me

 

You don't have my support for your design

You have failed us

And that means 

You have also failed yourself as well 

As your design stands 

It’s full of flaws

 

Where are you now

On vacation

Trying to improve your design

Are you enjoying a glass of red wine and chocolate

You need to know that your design isn't working at all 

It sucks!

 

According to one source

It took you six days for this design 

And you rested on the seventh day

Thinking perhaps you were done

 

Perhaps it should’ve taken you longer

Maybe six weeks, six months, or six years

But oops 

It would have been the sign of the beast

We wouldn’t want that

 

What are you going to do about it

It can't be your final design